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Halloween - Senryu

Halloween - Senryu Death stands in silence chaperone to innocence craven beggary ©10/18/2017 submitted to – Halloween Senryu – Poetry contest

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Date: 10/25/2017 11:06:00 PM

love your take on this John...congrats!

Date: 10/24/2017 2:35:00 PM

I like this senryu, John; the first line sets the eerie picture, the next two lines are food for thought. Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Date: 10/24/2017 8:35:00 AM

Deep meaning in this one John, enjoyed.

Date: 10/24/2017 7:21:00 AM

Congrats! <3 Kim

Date: 10/24/2017 5:44:00 AM

creepy senyru dear John! thank you and congrats :)

Date: 10/23/2017 3:38:00 PM

Very well done, John. seems very senryu-like to me. Congrats.

Date: 10/23/2017 11:05:00 AM

Terrific piece John, congratulations...

Date: 10/23/2017 7:30:00 AM

Back with congratulations :) xomo!

Date: 10/18/2017 8:16:00 AM

Great Senryu for more than just this contest, really fine work! That said, my best to you for the contest :) xomo!