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November mist came crawling as the silent day folded as twilight loomed in slumber, silver stars glistened in my eyes stirring my inner spirit I cried out through the heights of Gods love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/8/2011 3:06:00 PM
Wonderful, Rick. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:10:00 PM
from fog to glistening stars! Lovely!
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Date: 12/7/2011 3:12:00 PM
A quiet night sure got you ALL fired up, Rick...simple and reverent. congrats on a golden win...and u brought glory to the maker of the mountains..Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/7/2011 11:53:00 AM
Rick congrats on your win, beautiful..David
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Date: 12/7/2011 10:59:00 AM
very high in deed..we too have been having so must mist & fog one wonders if it is a physical manifestation of the earth confusion? Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2011 9:48:00 AM
Just amazing Rick!Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2011 12:13:00 AM
You got them words right Rick,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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