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Half Past Sunset

Its’ half past sunset and
The wind really blows cold.
No time left for memories 
And I am truly old.
Gravestones mark the path
That I must traverse.
Every shadow seems ominous and
Wraiths stalk like a curse.
So quickly I travel the distance,
From the gates of the entombed.
After all, what else is left for 
Someone who is doomed.

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:43:00 PM
    This one has great rhythm and flow to it..Interesting topic also..I enjoyed reading hit this evening..Thanks for stopping by my work "Spilled Coffee"..I probably will have a cup of coffee again when i have my poetry notebook and probably will spill some again one day that will land 'pon my notebook,..It is slightly stained with some the cover slightly curled now..Sara

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Sheol, a journey, with no way out. a deep thought with an everlasting image, of no safety no matter the path we take............... take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:09:00 PM
    wow, this one really hits me!!! I dig this kind of poetry. You told me you got a fave into my contest. Well, here is another fave just in case I ever do another Fave contest!!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 11:32:00 PM
    Sheol: an impressive collection of spiritual work you have here, Loved the flow of this one. SuZ

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Enjoyed this one..Yes, we all doomed from the day we are born..The question is what do we do with the time from when we are born until doomsday comes?...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..You have put the idea so very eloquently..Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Sheol, a very impressive poem...doomed in my book is only the start.. an interesting journey... thank you for sharing...LINDA

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:30:00 PM
    I do not think you are doomed....Show this world what you've got! Nice write! And thanks for stopping by with your kind words. :o)

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:26:00 PM
    wow great flow going and well penned great job i truly enjoyed it