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I found it snugly tucked away, Held deep within her private things Hidden under lock and key Was there more than eyes could see A secret love that couldn't be? That other past, what did it cost? Where was the heart, that had been lost? A cherished thing, .... a poem, of bliss A letter, too, that held a kiss Precious keepsake, or was it not?... Was it heartbreak, was it not? Perhaps it's not for me to know She was young, and fair of skin Perhaps,.... and then.., perhaps,... and then... Does it tell of secret love? Another spring, or just a whim? A treasured time, a change of fate? The date it holds, confuses me Revealing now, "what might have been?" When sleep upon her eyelids came And took her fairness far from here What held her name, with antique flair Of lilacs blooming, roses paired With half a heart, and secrets blamed? This tells me something, something dear... Someone loved her, someone cared long before my Grandpa dared
__________________________________________________________________ 1/6/16 For Catie Lindsey's Contest: "Half A Heart" Free Verse Extravaganza

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Date: 1/22/2016 11:41:00 PM
CARRIE, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:25:00 PM
Carrie,, awesome win... :) SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:00:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on winning in the Free Verse Extravaganza contest! -Hans :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:11:00 AM
Lovely write Carrie.. a deserved great hearty win... big congrats!!
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:22:00 PM
WOW, what and ending Carrie! ‘long before my grandpa dared’...Those five words speak VOLUMES. What a poem, what a poet - Congratulations from your biggest fan, Tim
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:22:00 PM
I knew this would be on the winner's list, Carrie. Just simply beautiful! Many congrats.
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Date: 1/11/2016 10:01:00 AM
So beautifully written, Carrie, and so filled with suspense that intrigues until your last line reveals the answer. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:53:00 AM
Congrats Cassie on your placement! :)*smiles*-luloo
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Date: 1/9/2016 9:30:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. A great read.
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Date: 1/9/2016 1:05:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful!!! A masterpiece, Carrie. Sure to top the winners list.
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