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Half a Buzz

Like a one winged fly he circled life... helplessly hopeful

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Paul Willason
Date: 2/1/2024 7:37:00 PM
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Gets the mind doing mental gymnastics...a clever piece, enjoyed
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 2/1/2024 5:39:00 PM
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Hello John, what a thought provoking Monoku that still has me thinking about that poor fly or poor guy. - Blessings, Daniel
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Bill Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:37:00 PM
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Nice monoku, John. If you think much about life, we're all a bit like that their fly. Have a great day, my friend. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:17:00 PM
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a creative and effective Monoku. I especially liked 'helplessly hopeful.' enjoy your evening, Sara
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/1/2024 9:19:00 AM
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Without wishing to invoke comment tag, I did find this endearing.. imagined the bugs in the bar in A Bugs Life, down but not out :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2024 3:43:00 PM
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I luv bugz!

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