Hairy Jam

Tam catching air Gust left me in a jam Uncontrollable hair My best lambs skin leather tam In the bay it swam

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Date: 4/9/2011 6:28:00 PM

cool to see you in the top 3 spot Robb. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honered third Place! Agape, Moses

Date: 4/9/2011 10:47:00 AM

Congrats Robb on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath

Date: 4/9/2011 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Robb

Date: 4/9/2011 2:33:00 AM

Quite an enjoyable read, this short, sweet poem.Brilliant in just five lines...Congratulations Robb on your super win. Best wishes, Gautami

Date: 4/8/2011 11:39:00 PM

Sorry about uyour loss but congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Date: 4/8/2011 10:12:00 PM

Hahaha Robb, I can so see this image. Many congrats for this win.

Date: 4/8/2011 3:52:00 PM

Way to go Robb my friend.. congrats on your 3rd place win in the bonnet contest.. great words as always luv.. enjoy and happy weekend ...

Date: 4/8/2011 2:26:00 PM

Ut oh! Well here was an opportunity for a new hat! Light & Love

Date: 4/8/2011 2:25:00 PM

lol! I see this all happening before my eyes. Great writing, Robb. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Date: 4/8/2011 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Robb. The poems were all so good was hard to judge. Love, Carol

Date: 3/19/2011 5:34:00 PM

Ut OH! did you swim for it?? very funny one! Light 7 Love