Haiku Wednesday Evening

i am happy my bad days are coming soon to weed out peacocks

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/12/2015 1:02:00 AM

I hope the bad days are short-lived or maybe the happy days will remain? Hugs, Rhonda

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/12/2015 8:56:00 AM

Rhonda, Bad days are good 'cause they help us to recognize true friends. Peacocks are fair weather friends who leave us in our bad days. They are colorful but pale in heart. I have firsthand experiences. Love.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2015 11:09:00 AM

Who are the peacocks, I hope I'm not one of them. 7 on this poem :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/12/2015 4:59:00 AM

No Eve you are not a peacock. Peacocks are fair-weather friends...Love

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/11/2015 6:59:00 AM

Hmmn...peacocks need weeding out? What will be left then? But I like it. PS. No comment on the lim I sent? No go then?

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/12/2015 5:01:00 AM

HaHaha a great limerick on me. I enjoyed it. Please write lims in PS. Delightful...God bless>>>>rajat