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Haiku: Traditional 56

time froze with her death dust dancing in a sunbeam haiku image hangs Brian Johnston June 6. 2016

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Date: 6/7/2016 6:47:00 AM
Well done Brian...
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Brian Johnston
Date: 6/8/2016 10:00:00 AM
Still exploring the depths of haiku possibilities Charlie. I like it too. For me there is no real difference between current attempts to define haiku as concrete images or photographs and mental constructs like love, hate, fear, etc. Information we get from our 5 senses is a model of reality as well and not reality itself. We all know love, joy and depression when we see it. Ha!

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