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Haiku: Traditional 31

what truly binds us - a million points of light flow, breathless milky way Brian Johnston April 3,2016 Inspired by Josie Hibbing on Face Book's 'Japanese Poetry Garden Path.'

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Date: 4/4/2016 3:33:00 AM
Lovely Brian..
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:21:00 PM
Oh I like that "breathless milky way" nicely said.
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:52:00 PM
Wonderful haiku Brian, good work...
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:45:00 PM
beautiful! :-) hugs Jan xx
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