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Haiku Spray

fast plunging gannets churning the sea white with spray - mothers floury hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/11/2014 1:44:00 AM
Excellent. Well done. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Michael Newman
Date: 12/13/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thanks for you time and comment,glad you enjoyed it.
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Michael Newman
Date: 12/13/2014 3:30:00 PM
Thank you for the time and comment.glad you enjoyed it. Miken
Date: 12/7/2014 5:40:00 PM
Beautifully done...For once a real haiku..BG
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Michael Newman
Date: 12/8/2014 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for your time and comment, that is really encouraging. miken
Date: 12/7/2014 12:54:00 PM
such a descriptive write - brilliant imagery! Hugs jan xxx
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Michael Newman
Date: 12/8/2014 2:03:00 AM
Thank you Jan, your support is very helpful

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