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Haiku Or Senyru

a starfield swaying shooting stars gather in piles jars full of star dust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/10/2015 5:48:00 AM
You have made the most out of only seventeen syllables. This is quite impressive.
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Date: 11/8/2015 8:13:00 PM
Perfect haiku! Senyru talks about people a 7! So
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Date: 11/8/2015 8:05:00 PM
I believe this would be a haiku in that its all about nature...more of a celestrial nature, but nature is not confined to one planet....thank you for sharing :)
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