Haiku Omelet 2

Omelets are eggs Gently brought to frying pan Secret is in fold

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/9/2013 9:45:00 AM

I'm definitely no cook. The best I can do is scrambled eggs (way easier than that delicate folding... haha). A haiku that instructs you on cooking, what a cool idea! Nice one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2012 12:25:00 AM

Awesome. a COOKING haiku. what a great idea.

John Posey
Date: 11/25/2012 10:18:00 AM

I must admit I dodged haikus for so long.... Now I'm feeling a little more confidence in writing them... Thanks for stopping by.... Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2012 12:15:00 PM

Hope the secret is good ... mmmmm - well written John. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey
Date: 11/23/2012 12:17:00 PM

Thanks Anne, I'm just trying to create some haiku leftovers....Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 11:54:00 AM

Wishing to unfold the secret one day...nice haiku 2...pd

John Posey
Date: 11/23/2012 11:58:00 AM

Thanks PD... Omelets are great, but I don't believe they will help at all with that leftover turkey... Love ya!... Jake