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Haiku Number Seven

You will be my light When the winter night burns out With the glowing log

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2010 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2009 7:51:00 PM
This is such a wonderful haiku. I can see the imagery quite clearly. Don't forget the chocolate and marsh mellows too. If you would like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, including haiku poems, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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Date: 2/12/2009 3:07:00 PM
Sound like a nice peaceful setting. Nice use of this concise form. Keep on writing! Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Karen
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Date: 1/16/2009 2:46:00 PM
You are your own light. Original Chi. Light & Love debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/16/2009 5:01:00 AM
A bit of romance in this haiku. The form is perfect as is the imagery within. Michael
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Date: 1/15/2009 5:28:00 PM
Nice warm haiku, touching words...Raul
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Date: 1/14/2009 11:31:00 PM
I can relate with this one Deirdre.
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Date: 1/14/2009 2:49:00 PM
Inspirational... love still glows, even in the absence of light and heat. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/14/2009 1:40:00 PM
Nice haiku.....sweet wording...Maryam
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