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Haiku Number Four

Snowscape's white dazzling Twilight falls -there's but a glow Robin red breast sleeps

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James Fraser

Date: 2/22/2010 10:29:00 AM

Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2010 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Deirdre. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Date: 2/21/2010 7:33:00 AM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your well deserved honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/3/2009 1:45:00 PM

Wake that robin. THINK SPRING!!! Vince

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2009 2:44:00 PM

Like blood on the snow...shiver. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/16/2009 4:57:00 AM

You successfully manage to create such vivid imagery while keeping the well defined style. A wonderful read my poet friend. Michael

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:35:00 PM

Nice 4th haiku, I love the simplicity of your work...Raul

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/15/2009 8:27:00 AM

I love the contrast of red and white... robins really do stand out in the snow. BRAVO Deirdre! Best wishes, Keith (PS have you read Dylan's 'A Child's Christmas In Wales?' There's a passage about a dead robin 'all but one of his fires out.' ...stunning!)

Date: 1/12/2009 1:39:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery in this poem. Nice use of color to connect the piece. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/11/2009 4:29:00 PM

nice juxtaposition of purity & blood bleeding, life, nice imagery! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/11/2009 4:05:00 PM

What a pretty picture here, beautiful. I cannot wait for that first robin! Love, Kristin