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Haiku Number Five

The plump hen grunted Having popped her morning free range No egg on her face

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 3:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Love, Carol

Date: 4/18/2010 3:17:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of reading this again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep the poetry coming. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/18/2009 1:34:00 PM

Deirdre, give me high five for this. You are mastering the Haiku form. Ernilando

Date: 1/18/2009 12:57:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for this day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/16/2009 4:59:00 AM

The read brought a smile to my face with the subtle humor. The form is off a bit but does not take away from the enjoyment of the read. An excellent write. Michael

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:34:00 PM

Nice one here, this is an egg-quisite haiku...Raul

Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:30:00 PM

cool work i do haikus to..................danielle

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/15/2009 6:08:00 AM

Very clever Deidre! ...cute final line!! Best wishes, Keith

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/13/2009 12:43:00 AM

Well presented , Deirdre . I see you've got your " sunny-side-up " ... Roll on no.6 ....

Steve Edmonds

Date: 1/12/2009 4:27:00 PM

Nice haiku, I invite you to read some of mine...Caremel