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Haiku Night Serenata

a lone woodpecker drumming on the branch of Spring -night serenata

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/28/2017 8:56:00 PM

This is just so beautiful, love how you expressed this!!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/28/2017 6:42:00 PM

Beautiful lines. I saw two red headed woodpeckers before the trees budded out, but they must have gone to find some dead wood.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/28/2017 4:41:00 PM

Good Evening Charmaine. This is perfect in my eyes. The format is in true form voice and tone. The moment is endearing. Well done

Chris Green

Date: 3/28/2017 4:29:00 PM

A beautiful and melodic Haiku that speaks of spring and all that nature brings our way to celebrate the season. I love hearing and then watching woodpeckers on the trees. It is an almost magical sight

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2017 4:10:00 PM

Charma, the woodpeckers at my old home used to be quite annoying, but your haiku is delightful! Right now there are people in many states hopefully "drumming on the branch of Spring." A lovely haiku.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/28/2017 3:36:00 PM

Hopefully the drums are heard by his love. Nice spring haiku