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Haiku Moon

Dark moon on the rise Silver black ocean and skies How you hypnotize ©Danielle White

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Brian Strand

Date: 12/2/2009 1:00:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Carolyn's contest Danielle.Will be upholding you in prayer concerning your blog today.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

Date: 11/29/2009 1:19:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Danielle! Best of luck in Raul's contest. (You do plan to enter it, don't you?) Hugs, Donna

Danny Nunn

Date: 11/29/2009 11:42:00 AM

Good write and describes it well, enjoyed...Thanks on the Road Runner...I agree with what you say on the poems we now are reading...they make so sense, then why write them...I am a few past a few years past a young man, but thanks..I am a old cowboy that like to write...a story teller...stories put into verse...sort of look like a poem...hope you like them..thanks Danny

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/29/2009 9:04:00 AM

This is a hypnotic haiku, Danielle.......loved it!! ~ Love, Carrie

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/29/2009 6:29:00 AM

Dear Danielle, A Winner!! I like the way YOU rhymed this Exquisite Haiku I wish YOU Good Luck but I don't think YOU need it See YOU in the Winner's Circle YOUR Liege...HG Soup Mail Call