Haiku Hell

Haikus with beer go well, I was told So I sat down and I ate eighty-four And when I got through I’m here to tell you, There sure was a mess on the floor Written by John Posey 12/22/12

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Donna Jones

Date: 10/19/2013 12:57:00 PM

Oh that's is gross...but awesome.....:-) :-)

Holly Moore

Date: 12/27/2012 3:47:00 AM

That's disgusting..very clever..Thanks for your comments on my Nonets..you should try one. I actually write mine backwards from 1-9 syllable count (almost like an etheree) then flip it. Works for me...Hugs, Holly

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 9:25:00 PM

ha..love it...pd

John Posey
Date: 12/25/2012 4:31:00 AM

PD, those things really tore me up... See my reply to Andrea's comment below.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2012 6:13:00 PM

Must be like shelling peanuts at five Guys, where they hand you a bunch of peanuts while you await your burgers and fries. Love this one relating with haikus!!

John Posey
Date: 12/25/2012 4:27:00 AM

I don't think so, sweetheart. I believe it was a malady brought on by some gastric instability. I lost a great pair of shoes in the process and they had to burn my clothes. .and they only reopened last week... and I've been banned for life.. Thanks for the comment.... Jake

Susan Palli

Date: 12/22/2012 11:47:00 AM

Funny one!

John Posey
Date: 12/22/2012 2:48:00 PM

Thank you, This one even brought a chuckle as I wrote it.... Jake