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Haiku: Fish

Haiku: Fish solitary night A little, big fish drinking betrayed by the hook By Zyrool

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Date: 5/7/2024 5:20:00 PM

Ahh!! Poor fish. I wonder if he was eaten by those who were using the hook. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/7/2024 7:15:00 PM

Let’s hope so, Sara. Thank you for reading my work. Enjoy your day.

Date: 5/6/2024 5:09:00 AM

Another succinct, well-crafted haiku. Carol Louise

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/6/2024 5:35:00 AM

Thank you Carol, for your support, greatly appreciated. Zyrool.

Date: 5/5/2024 11:22:00 AM

You should keep going with it! Excellent start!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/5/2024 12:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Lynn, it means a lot. Have wonderful Sunday.

Date: 5/2/2024 10:03:00 AM

You weaved this together really well..

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/2/2024 1:06:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Silent my friend. Enjoy your day/night.

Date: 5/1/2024 5:05:00 AM

Wonderful imagery, Zyrool. Nice haiku, my friend.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/1/2024 7:53:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Your comments always gives me a boost. Have a great day, Jerry.

Date: 4/29/2024 6:27:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Zyrool, bad ending for the fish. :-) A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/30/2024 9:06:00 AM

Thank you for your support, my friend, reality isn’t always nice. Have fabulous day Bill.

Date: 4/29/2024 5:44:00 PM

truly captivating...lovely Haiku..have a pleasant evening, Sara

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/30/2024 9:07:00 AM

Hi Sara your words mean a lot, thank you so much my friend. Enjoy your day.

Date: 4/29/2024 4:46:00 PM

Somewhat sad, but an excellent haiku. May the saving grace be that the little fish was tasty.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/30/2024 9:10:00 AM

Thank you for the read, Hilda. Your words give a boost to my writing. Sending Blessings your way.