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Haiku Anti War

babies are buried now we are happy relaxed single missile lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/7/2015 12:28:00 AM
Good message. I'd slightly modify the middle line to "Now we're happily relaxed"-- you need an adverb there to be grammatically correct.
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