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Haiku and Questionku

Red lips awaiting natures call to relieve stress.... Showered with loves rain Birds and bees watching as bodies writhe in passion.... seeds of love planted New buds are forming love of nature fulfilled.... Did the earth move for you too?

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Kolapo Olapoju

Date: 2/27/2013 5:38:00 AM

I love haiku, and I've got some of mine too, but none as complete as this. I'm impressed and inspired by this outstanding piece.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/27/2013 5:39:00 PM

to be honest I am crap at it, its a hit and miss with me, a few friends on here have advised me, but some have given up cos I find it so hard. there is a site called daily haiku may I suggest you look and read it daily it does help/...Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/30/2013 12:11:00 AM

You are really good with the haiku, these are really powerful as well. I really enjoyed all six of them. Thank you for sharing. I know you will do great in the contest.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:50:00 AM

Thank you once again..seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2013 11:47:00 PM

my favorite was the questionku. It was a really neat tie up to this series!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:50:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I was wondering...Seren

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/29/2013 2:41:00 PM

Seren a wonderful Haiku. Il loved the question at the end. Warm Smiles, Connie

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/29/2013 3:33:00 PM

haha me too. thanks for stopping by...Seren