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Haiku About the Rose

a pressed rose between last pages his fading scent Contemporary Haiku

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/28/2017 3:05:00 PM

Roses are beautiful thus I had to read your entry. I see a perfect haiku entry and form. It is true on all counts including the voice and tone. Well done

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/18/2017 8:56:00 AM

This is special!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2017 9:39:00 PM

WOW, I still remember when you gave me a great haiku years ago ( did I convince you to enter one of my contests?) I just remember you doing one that I was so impressed with. You have true talent with haiku and this shows it.

Ali Pran

Date: 2/17/2017 2:06:00 PM

Lovely lines. Well done.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/13/2017 9:07:00 PM

Lovely. What exactly is a contemporary Haiku?

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/16/2017 3:05:00 PM

The modern/contemporary haiku...is like the traditional haiku but with less than 17 syllables... :)..(5/7/5)..Glad you like it dear friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2017 6:00:00 PM

oh so precious a poem Charma:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 2/13/2017 3:13:00 PM

There is a certain sadness woven into the beauty of this piece. Pressed between the last pages...I can truly feel this poem Charmaine. Though a memory that today may be sad will hopefully be one that creates a smile later on in life. Absolutely beautiful.