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Haiku About a Swan

swan lake a feather falls silently Ekphrastic Haiku

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Tim Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 9:38:00 AM

I can picture the glass lake with the feather floating gracefully down...beautiful

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/3/2017 5:22:00 PM

Beautiful and peaceful Charmaine! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2017 2:57:00 PM

-Beautiful haiku, Charmaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2017 2:38:00 PM

Perfection in a few lines Charma! Hugs jan xx 7

Chris Green

Date: 4/3/2017 2:18:00 PM

Beautiful, serene and soft Charmaine. Your words, though few, paint a scene of solitude and wonder. I can see the ripples flowing out from the fallen feather, gracefully embracing the shore.