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Haiku Lace

Plumed egrets shuffling dripping white laced reflections ~ of the Lace maker.

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Cona Adams

Date: 1/3/2015 9:29:00 AM

An easy seven, Michael. This morning, I have been enjoying many of your Haiku. Thanks for sharing. I remember seeing an egret in Florida with flowing lacy tail feathers. My poem was titled "Casual Egret."

Michael Newman
Date: 1/3/2015 9:47:00 AM

very encouraging comment , thanks for reading more than one! this little cameo was from spain originally, Mike

David Meade

Date: 11/22/2014 10:44:00 AM

Nicely done! the last line is classic, I can't wait to see another Egret so I can check out it's hands!! All the best.

Michael Newman
Date: 11/26/2014 12:49:00 PM

As I said to Maurice I was not happy with that ,have re written the last line. Appreciate your feed back Miken

Michael Newman
Date: 11/23/2014 3:14:00 PM

Oops was that over laced ! miken thanks