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Haiku No 37

Lone surfer rides waves Steers through a rainbow sunrise Crashed - forgot sun shades. Azure blue dazzling Divided waters surging A whale of a day.

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Eiken Laan

Date: 1/23/2011 3:41:00 AM

Deirdre, I can see you on the strand in Tramore writing these. Beautiful and wonderful last lines:)) I am just back home after leaving at Dublin airport for her flight to Madrid. She is on her way now so I am fine and she will be fine too.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2011 2:42:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and creative work..Your presence at my work was a delight..Sara

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/14/2011 4:45:00 AM

Hi Deirdre. You are some woman at the Haiku. The second I love but the first, I love and laughed at. See you. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 9:39:00 PM

that was cute: a whale of a day!! I like your humor you insert. LUv ,Andrea

Date: 1/13/2011 10:02:00 AM

Quite comical. Thank you for this :D Keep it up!