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Haiku # 12 .

THE BOSSY ROBIN PERCHED UPON THE SPADE HANDLE DEMANDING DIGGING .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2010 10:20:00 PM

oh, I like how this word digging can imply two different things! More birds still!!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/20/2009 3:49:00 PM

Hey, no fair. I AM NOT BOSSY OR DEMANDING! Take it back, NOW!!! :) (lol) Great imagery in this, Sean! Funny, too, especially if I picture myself sitting on a spade handle, chirpping out orders! Love, QR

Date: 11/30/2008 3:36:00 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one Sean. Thank you for sharing your gift of humor. I especially like the last line--reminds me of a summer vacation. Thank you also for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen