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Haiku # 27 .

December solstice The sun's shortest working day . Low Winter's high~light .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/11/2010 9:40:00 PM
It's quite the contrast from the one coming up this June!
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Date: 1/7/2009 2:21:00 PM
Nice hiaku Sean, one of my favorite forms...Raul
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Date: 1/4/2009 1:29:00 PM
Haiku Master Sean-- Am gub smacked by number nine--Music fills the air----Déirdre in Loku Tramoris
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Date: 12/20/2008 1:17:00 PM
I can't beleive how many haiku's you have written. I find it difficult to write just one. Awesome!!!! Sean. lainie
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Date: 12/18/2008 8:52:00 PM
That's a great Haiku Sean...Take care and Happy Holidays! Farah
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Date: 12/16/2008 4:03:00 PM
Awesome write here, Sean ... love the last line!! Hope you and yours have a warm, wonderful holiday and that '09 is a great year for you!!
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Date: 12/15/2008 1:50:00 PM
Sean - you should have entered this in the Winter Solstice contest! Or perhaps you did another one. Either way no doubt if you did it was just as awesome as this! Ok, what are we going to do with that Wilfriedo Dorito anyway??? He is a very bad boy. : ) Have a beautiful holiday season dear man, and all the best to you and yours throughout the new year. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 1:04:00 PM
Very pretty and poetic! I really enjoyed reading it. :) Happy Holidays to you and yours, Amy :)
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Date: 12/15/2008 7:58:00 AM
Great haiku .Depends where you are though I suppose Sean, but we know where Munster are ...back on top.(Unlike our English cricketers, who blew it today or rather on the 4th day).Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/15/2008 4:38:00 AM
Sean this is an excellent Haiku - I kind of feel like I must have missed something - Been gone awhile I guess - at any rate God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/15/2008 3:10:00 AM
Fred, you devil, you! lol tisk, tisk, always in the gutter, eh? But seriously, Sean, a brilliant, literally, haiku. Love this upcoming solstice...the most special...Man, now I wonder what that haiku #69 will be...maybe you should just skip to that one, and cut the suspense. lol love, Kristin
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