Haiku :: 8 :: Sparrows

Sparrows in the grass heads bob like ducks in a pond seeking who knows what Collection: Haiku Written: November 2019

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Mark Toney

Date: 11/20/2019 5:44:00 PM

Delightful :) ~Mark

Beto Riginale
Date: 11/20/2019 6:18:00 PM

Thanks Mark. the sparrows were really funny , bobbing like they were :-) beto

Ann Foster

Date: 11/20/2019 9:58:00 AM

Only they know that secret. Fun write. I enjoyed it. Ann

Beto Riginale
Date: 11/20/2019 10:09:00 AM

Hi Ann. Thank you for your comment. I really enjoy the birds that visit my garden. The sparrows look like those ducks that you could buy at the 5 and dime stores when I was young. You put them over a glass of water and they would start bobbing - real fun :-) beto