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Haiku 9 - 2020

freezing rain warning tomorrow everywhere ice slip sliding along

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Rituko Shindo

Date: 1/11/2020 10:20:00 PM

If you're 10 years old, you are happy to hear the warning. No school? Do you play sled tomorrow? Do you skate? Exciting,isn't it? If you are adult enough, you're just melancholy. (-_^)wink

Carol Fillmore
Date: 1/12/2020 3:22:00 PM

so true!! the children are delighted no doubt, could well have a day off tomorrow:) those of us adult enough are a bit melancholy but mostly just concerned we'll fall and break a bone!! know I am. I think the storm is mostly over now. It could have been far worse, though. Ontario and Quebec got much worse weather than we did.