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Haiku 96

Haiku 96 woodland stream whirlpools tying water into smoke rings

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Date: 10/19/2013 6:34:00 PM

I can picture this. Well done.

Date: 10/18/2013 12:04:00 PM

superbly done with a greeat juxtaposition, jack... idol!..:) huggs

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/19/2013 11:37:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Nette... Jack

Date: 10/17/2013 7:50:00 PM

this is one of your best. LOVE it.

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/19/2013 11:36:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad you liked it... Jack

Date: 10/17/2013 6:37:00 PM

Totally awesome....I'll always think of you when I see one now....:-)

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/18/2013 12:28:00 PM

Smoke rings for a non-smoker? Hmmm... Jack

Date: 10/17/2013 12:47:00 PM

- Competent !!! - Well done,Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/17/2013 12:50:00 PM

Sorry... I typed my response tp Drake in the wrong box... Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/17/2013 12:49:00 PM

Thanks, as always, Drake... Jack

Date: 10/17/2013 8:49:00 AM

Another beauty. The "smoke ring" speak volumes.

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/17/2013 12:49:00 PM

Thanks, as always, Drake... Jack

Date: 10/16/2013 10:34:00 PM

Wonderful use of images, Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/16/2013 10:42:00 PM

Thanks for the comment... Jack