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Haiku 9-21-2016 For Contest

Haiku 9/21/2016 distant eagles shriek icy dawn stills the echo feathered silence reigns 9/21/2016 submitted to – Traditional Haiku – Poetry Contest

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Laura Hay

Date: 10/6/2016 6:39:00 AM

Marvellous tranquil beauty, well done, warm regards, Laura. #7

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/27/2016 2:42:00 PM

John, I love this scene you have captured! Going in my fave! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/26/2016 3:21:00 PM

I could hear it and sense it! Congrats on placing in a contest actually judged on accurate ability and style, that's meaningful. I learned a lot reading Catie's blog ... CayCay

Lu Loo

Date: 9/26/2016 10:34:00 AM

congrats John on your well deserved win! I love eagles :)-luloo

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 9/26/2016 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations John - great placement Regards, Mark

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2016 10:18:00 AM

John congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/26/2016 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations, John! ...Fran

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/26/2016 8:47:00 AM

I love the contrast between noise and silence! Congratulations, John!