Haiku 7

village 'holiday' rooster breaks a dreamy sleep rude awakening ----------------------------------------

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/10/2023 7:48:00 PM

Wonderful! Roosters do have a way of intruding themselves when we slumber. Congratulations! Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/22/2021 11:42:00 AM

Beautiful...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2021 8:59:00 AM

:)love this wonderful Haiku,Senha, congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2021 8:28:00 AM

How lovely to see you back, dear Sneha! Congratulations on placing first with this lovely haiku. I can still remember reading it some 3 years ago...time flies too quickly!! ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/22/2021 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. So cute. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day...........

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/22/2021 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserving winner Sneha, wonderful imagination to put this haiku together, cheers David

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 4/21/2021 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sneha, for this clever haiku!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/21/2021 6:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win! I love the rooster waking me up! Doesn't happen where I live anymore!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/21/2021 4:29:00 PM

dropping back again with many congrats Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson

Date: 4/21/2021 2:23:00 PM

I really like the image you've created here,Sneha and the contrast of the peaceful atmosphere and relaxation with the raucous rooster!

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/22/2021 2:02:00 PM

Oh I used to hate that! Very nice Sneha :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/2/2020 11:17:00 PM

"rude awakening for sure!" Well penned! Roosters wake me up daily. I live in the country.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/15/2019 9:06:00 PM

Oh yes! I remember this amazing haiku, Sneha. I enjoyed reading this awesome poem again. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2019 4:46:00 PM

so good to see you here with a win, Sneha. Congrats.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/10/2019 12:12:00 AM

Wonderful poem. Congratulations and blessings.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/9/2019 3:49:00 PM

Lovely imagery and penning, Sneha. Congrats on your much deserved win.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/9/2019 3:45:00 PM

many congrats Sneha I just love this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2019 8:59:00 AM

Darn rooster! ;0) congrats on another win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/8/2019 1:36:00 PM

Ha, ha: Perfectly penned, Sneha! Long ago, my first wife and I lived in a small M-E agricultural village, where the rooster woke us up as early as 3:30 a.m. in June, before the advent of daylight savings time. There, however, it wasn't rude, as we had to get up at that time anyway -- to head off to morning prayers and then to the fields. Nothing like those roosters, let me tell you!! This is a FAVE for me.