Haiku 75

Haiku 75 sunlight on your face... dark hair splashed on the pillow your smile, your blue eyes

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Skat A

Date: 8/21/2013 1:30:00 PM

intriguing haiku Jack, makes me want them blue eyes. SKAT

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/21/2013 1:39:00 PM

You know I'll bet that you can have any color you want with the proper contact lenses. I confess that I waffled between blue (my color) and green, which I think is truly beautiful. Choices, choices... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 9:49:00 AM

beautiful Jack, a smile will always do... xox...Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 10:12:00 AM

Most of the time...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2013 2:20:00 PM

... yes, I have blue eyes.... :))) - Love it, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/13/2013 5:17:00 PM

I debated blue, green or brown. Blue just seemed the prettiest, although green eyes are very special. Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 8/13/2013 6:04:00 AM

Charming Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/13/2013 8:18:00 AM

Thanks, Donna... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/12/2013 8:50:00 AM

Absolutely charming! Cherishing the simple pleasures.

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/12/2013 9:18:00 AM

Often simple pleasures are the best, and the most lasting as memories.