Haiku 72

Haiku 72 summer Sunday blues shadows hide behind my eyes this dark afternoon

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Date: 8/6/2013 10:32:00 PM

Hi Jack; i hope you don't have too many days like that. We all go through those every now and then. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/7/2013 7:33:00 AM

Not too many, Lucilla. Thanks for your concern... Jack

Date: 8/6/2013 3:21:00 PM

Interesting Haiku..Enjoyed reading though it seems a little sad..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/6/2013 3:24:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. It was a sad day. Nothing in particular,,, just sad... Jack

Date: 8/6/2013 2:53:00 PM

If you have blue eyes, that gives it even more imagery!! glad to see this one today and I hope your blues get chased away!

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/6/2013 3:15:00 PM

Blue feelings, that is...

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/6/2013 3:14:00 PM

I hadn't thought about blue eyes, but I do have them. Blues are better...

Date: 8/6/2013 9:20:00 AM

summer and dark.. what a beautiful contrast and a delightful juxtaposition.. well done, again and again, jacck!..:)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/6/2013 9:33:00 AM

Thanks, Nette. I appreciate the comment.

Date: 8/5/2013 9:12:00 AM

There are some strong hidden messages between these few lines. Fantastic job!

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/5/2013 11:40:00 AM

Thanks, Drake. I value your comments... Jack