Haiku

the heron's walking secretly, seeing a fish catch! a net trapped it !

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/30/2018 1:27:00 PM

Oops, he should be more careful; the catch is not worth entrapment. Well penned.

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 10:53:00 PM

:) SKAT

Tasruzzaman Babu
Date: 11/12/2015 9:49:00 AM

thank u SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/28/2015 10:17:00 PM

Hi T. B., WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tasruzzaman Babu
Date: 10/28/2015 10:33:00 PM

thank u

Skat A

Date: 10/28/2015 9:55:00 PM

Tasruzzaman Babu,,Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Tasruzzaman Babu
Date: 10/28/2015 10:34:00 PM

thank u

Jill Spagnola

Date: 10/28/2015 11:32:00 AM

the awesome majestic heron needs to be cautious around humans just like all other! I enjoyed the imagery in your piece... :), jill

Tasruzzaman Babu
Date: 10/28/2015 12:29:00 PM

thank you so much.