Haiku 6 Together

laughter, sweet -- robust, pouring forth from your belly my heart leaps with joy

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Skat A

Date: 11/3/2015 9:07:00 PM

David, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/23/2015 9:40:00 AM

from your belly hmmm real laughter I once joined laughing club.Love David

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/13/2015 8:25:00 AM

A definite 7 from me David. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2014 4:12:00 PM

Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading it today.,Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2014 12:09:00 AM

this one is SO sweet. I love it.

David Meade
Date: 10/30/2014 8:20:00 PM

I know you don't look at replies but just in case -- thank-you. I love belly laughs -- the bigger the belly the better!