Haiku 6

crowbar tries to pry my oyster solitary exists self-contained

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Cindy Lu

Date: 5/8/2012 9:21:00 AM

It's as irriatating as sand in the eyes perhaps, what a pearly geniune write! Much Love, Cindy Lu

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2012 9:37:00 PM

good one!! love the metaphor

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2012 8:12:00 PM

Hi Chuckooroos... how are you today? Me..i'm all over the soup for another 2 hours.. This is a very mysterious haiku.. the image is not clear to me.. however it is an excellent haiku..... enjoyed your poem, take care~ ALWAYS ~ xox ~ PD

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/30/2012 9:50:00 AM

Love the hidden meaning in this Chuck, trying to find your inner self is always a difficult project. You have a perfect haiku with all the rules adhered to as well as words that challenge thought!

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 4/30/2012 8:37:00 AM

An interesting haiku with many levels of meaning...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2012 1:50:00 AM

Well done! - hugs Anne-Lise