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Haiku 6-15-2016

Haiku 6/15/2016 warmth rises slowly beckoning the cold blooded silent slitherer John G. Lawless 6/15/2016

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Date: 6/18/2016 11:26:00 AM
Nice write John, I like reptiles - my ex wife was one, but she was too cold :)
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Date: 6/17/2016 8:41:00 PM
ooh, great sound effect in last line.
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Date: 6/16/2016 8:42:00 PM
Wow, makes me wonder... However it sure does... A perfect and a fav, ... I don't know why, but I love the second line... Skat
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John Lawless
Date: 6/16/2016 9:18:00 PM
Glad you liked it SKAT, thanks for stopping to comment

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