Haiku 5

In its final soar Finds the limb it learned to fly Lands, to fly no more Gene Bourne 06-08-14 .

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/4/2020 10:54:00 AM

A definite cycle of life you have captured with your pen, in my favorite form. Wonderful use of imagery as well in this tiny masterpiece. Painting a picture in so few words is difficult but you seem to be on your way to be painting many. Thanks for sharing your gifts with us. This one will go straight to my favorites.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/6/2014 6:56:00 AM

I am a haiku lover and I love this inspirational piece - Bravo, my friend! Pandita

Gene Bourne
Date: 8/6/2014 12:17:00 PM

I love them to. Trying to condense a "heart grabbing" message in so few words is a challenge...and I love trying to find the right words that blend into a message readers might be enticed by. Thanks for your comment, Pandita....YF....Gene.

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/9/2014 6:45:00 PM

strong Haiku Gene

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/9/2014 10:41:00 PM

Thanks, Fred......as one of your fans and "Fav Poets" this is of course appreciated........YF......Gene.