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Haiku the leaf bent into the pond, sipping the water… tiny bird with thirst; © R K Chowdary 30Jul2014

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Date: 7/31/2014 1:14:00 AM
nice imaginary
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Ramakrishna Chowdary Jasti
Date: 7/31/2014 11:59:00 AM
Jayachandran.....Thank you!
Date: 7/30/2014 7:30:00 AM
ooh imaginative and beautiful!
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Ramakrishna Chowdary Jasti
Date: 7/30/2014 12:17:00 PM
Hi Casarah....Thank you so much for your nice words. R K
Date: 7/30/2014 6:24:00 AM
Very descriptive Haiku..Sometimes birds and other animals need water placed outside for them more than they need food..Sara
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Ramakrishna Chowdary Jasti
Date: 7/30/2014 12:19:00 PM
Hi Sara.....Yes, I agree with your observation and thanks for your nice comment. R K

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