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Haiku 56 About Love

Her hands upon his window-sill a climbing jasmine

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/18/2014 4:25:00 PM

A beautifully delicious gratifying Haiku.

Saba Khan

Date: 7/27/2014 10:23:00 AM

Short and perfect.Good one!

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/19/2014 3:30:00 PM

Nice dear...Enjoyed them...

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/26/2014 2:41:00 PM

Ahh.......many double meanings here.....I love this !!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2014 10:49:00 AM

- A lovely haiku <3 <3 <3!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/22/2014 8:48:00 AM

Prosit Charmaine. Remain faithful to Haiku; you two get on so well together!

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/20/2014 8:19:00 AM

A beautifully written Haiku my dear Charmaine! I'm one of your biggest fans! But you knew that, right! Big loving hugs and kisses! Jack XOXOX

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/19/2014 1:50:00 AM

Excellent, love it.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/14/2014 9:56:00 AM

Now this one is superb! Can't decide which is better, this or the last I read. This poem focuses in on the small, yet beautiful details in such a way that allows me to see a bigger picture. Talented, I say. I sense a favor coming again.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/1/2014 3:25:00 PM

he must be FINE!!!!

Chris Boskovski

Date: 1/30/2014 11:39:00 PM

Oh wow, what a romantic poem. It sounds to me that she is climbing up to her love, but she is just out of reach. Such a lovely write, Haikus are hard to write, but Charma you have no problem with them! I love this poem, a brilliant write! :) xoxo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2014 8:02:00 AM

This one is so special I wanted to read it again.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2014 9:41:00 AM

What a great imagination......I love the way that jasmine could be the flower, or the girl......perfectly done !!! Well deserving a place of honor!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/25/2014 8:05:00 AM

Glad your back and writing great pieces like this. Congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2014 7:47:00 AM

- Charmaine - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/25/2014 3:15:00 AM

Outstanding entry deserving of your wonderful win. Kudos!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/24/2014 9:53:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Charmaine. Congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2014 8:02:00 PM

Congratulations, Char, on the fine win,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2014 7:44:00 PM

this one is a GORGEOUS GEM, Charma. I'm so happy you entered it in my contest. I remember how you entered another stunning one in a haiku contest I had several years ago. You are a talent!! Congrats on second place.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/24/2014 2:23:00 PM

Just beautiful Charmine!

Michael Dom

Date: 1/22/2014 3:16:00 AM

perfection.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/20/2014 9:38:00 PM

Wow, this is a masterful Haiku my friend! I truly loved reading this wondrous poem this evening Charmaine! What a glorious piece, quite the incredible poem, Great Work!!

Mohammad Abedin

Date: 1/20/2014 1:25:00 PM

Nice

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/20/2014 12:41:00 PM

Such few words can paint such a big picture. I loved it....Hugs...Roger

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/20/2014 12:24:00 PM

thats very sweet and beautiful