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Haiku 55 About the Rose

a pressed rose petal falls from between pages life's final stage

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James Fraser

Date: 8/19/2014 6:23:00 PM

A beauty now lost, at what cost. Nice one Charmaine, James :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/18/2014 2:19:00 PM

Well done -JT

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/11/2014 8:34:00 AM

You are a monster on the Haiku. I love your work, always a gift for the senses!!Asavvy1

Paul Callus

Date: 2/22/2014 4:15:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku. So much in so few words. At my age it becomes more meaningful.

Michael Dom

Date: 1/22/2014 3:13:00 AM

always a wonderful moment to find folded flowers in an old book.

Jack Jordan

Date: 1/6/2014 6:13:00 PM

Beautiful, Charmaine, as is always the case with your writing... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/6/2014 8:18:00 AM

Goosebumps!!! Incredible. Absolutely incredible. Happy New Year, Charmaine. =)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/5/2014 4:06:00 PM

A soft write but it has a deeper meaning in the lines, worth the read dear fellow souper. cheri

Ken Carroll

Date: 1/5/2014 11:43:00 AM

Nicely expressed Charmaine.. Ken

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/5/2014 10:27:00 AM

You have a new baby? Tell me more. Congratulations! Also this is a very sweet poem.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/5/2014 4:58:00 PM

I have one baby girl one year four mnths old : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2014 10:04:00 PM

Beautiful Charma, very light... And deep.... enjoying the senryu... LINDA

David Williams

Date: 1/4/2014 12:41:00 PM

Charma, an excellent image making this a wonderful senryu…David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/3/2014 2:47:00 PM

impressive in its pacing and ending, charms.. love it!..huggs

Peter Dome

Date: 1/3/2014 11:54:00 AM

Wonderful and clever. well done. best wishes. Pete.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2014 11:02:00 PM

i adore this one. thanks so much for your support on my blog. Wishing you the best in the new year, charma.

Donna Jones

Date: 1/2/2014 5:31:00 PM

Very beautiful Charmaine.. happy new year

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/2/2014 4:22:00 PM

Then I will call you little one for to me, you have always had that innocence and sweetness and now your own wee one and you can if you like continue to call me Ma I love it [Debbie's fine too] Yassie & Kash sometimes call me Ma too. This discomfort is not between us, we know each others heart. Light & Love Always

James Peranteau

Date: 1/2/2014 4:16:00 PM

Not final stage dear poet; a gander of a moment in time whence those captivating eyes of yours were meant to sparkle ! Lift the petal up, after you recall its once devotion and gently center it betwix the page it once held your stare! Lovely write Charmain ! Have a blessed New Year, you and you little angel ! ......Much love, james

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/2/2014 6:36:00 AM

Happy new year to you Charmaine. Lovely stuff from you : )

Wendy Meyer

Date: 12/30/2013 5:49:00 PM

I loved this memory expressed in just a few chosen words. A bit sad to me but the lines leave an emotionally-deep trail of memory to last.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/30/2013 4:17:00 PM

an opening chapter paints between the pages so very beautifully

Daver Austin

Date: 12/30/2013 11:44:00 AM

I love the shorter forms and this one is to love. Love, daver

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/29/2013 5:44:00 PM

My dear Charmaine....like everything you write....this is soft and pleasing to the senses....I wish you a very pleasant and rewarding New Year. Hugs.....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2013 3:57:00 PM

- A pleasant memory between pages ... - HAPPY NEW YEAR !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/29/2013 3:47:00 PM

Dear friends..Happy New Year..Wishing you happy beginnings.Thankyou for all of you who supported my poetry.