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haiku 4

my son's first picture --
a dust-covered rocker 
by the window

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  1. Date: 9/2/2012 4:34:00 PM
    Thank you Debbie, i like the image,, very sad and alone though... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:00:00 PM
    This is nice and kind of sad.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:02:00 PM
    Love haiku ,,,, 2 is better ;}

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 9:27:00 PM
    Open or opened? Im using "opened" and the effect is terrific! What a feeling! I love it! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 3:19:00 PM
    Wow, this one is deep my friend! I enjoyed it a lot! Great Work!!

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/19/2012 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it's not right yet [pout] I working on it!
  1. Date: 8/19/2012 2:48:00 PM
    Debbie oohh this one cuts deep...David