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haiku 4

ripples spread
from the turning waterwheel --
sparrow song

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  1. Date: 8/26/2012 4:55:00 PM
    love haiku ;}

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 9:33:00 PM
    A lovely scene, Deborah! I have never written a haiku using the hearing perception! Nicely done, HM! ; )

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 11:02:00 AM
    I love the picture of this one, Debs.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 5:46:00 AM
    ah...nicely and lovely :) thanks Debbie ,,,luv SK

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 5:16:00 AM
    Debbie, wonderful............David

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 5:16:00 PM
    I can see this one. As a teen, I was given a budget to decorate a bedroom (we had moved, again) My sister carefully spent the money. Got a border, bedset, pillows, even posters. I blew it all on wallpaper. The wallpaper was ascene of an old mill, a stream and cattails. I can still close my eyes & see the pattern. It was comforting. I could lose myself in the image, tune out anything.. almost anything...your haiku reminded me of this. You're right!I was subjective, but the slap/meal=tasteless;)

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Good capuring of the moment...Thanks Debi,yes I didn't get your comment there.

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 3:14:00 PM
    This is good haiku. Yes, form is good and learning the value of good poetry forms are invaluable. With reference to my comment on my poem, Innocence: If you read the blog on my website, my question whether we should limit ourselves only to recognized poetry form, will become clear. Re: Dusk Smiles.I had laid it out in that fashion to illustrate the link between the words (not ends only) and to illustrate how George Herbert had used the last 4 words in reverse and the opening words to close it:-)