Haiku

pen delivers thought into word-- baby cries

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Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/15/2013 8:44:00 AM

hi my sweet lady Mehnaz..i love reading your nice write.. amazing...<3 thanks you for stopping by my wall.. appreciate it so much dearest one <3 :) Sk

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2013 5:31:00 AM

Great contrast..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/6/2013 1:04:00 AM

thanks Sara..

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/1/2013 10:54:00 AM

And reality hits! This is a grand write Mehnaz! I truly loved reading this glorious poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/3/2013 11:44:00 PM

thanks Russell...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2013 8:33:00 AM

A very interesting personification!!! wow.

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/1/2013 7:00:00 PM

soup mail....

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/1/2013 4:16:00 AM

this is wonderful 11 syllables of sheer joy...

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/1/2013 7:00:00 PM

Thanks Harry....Was just trying to make it shorter than 17 syllable count