Haiku 3

glass fragments on sand crumpled words kite on sea winds . . . love's last message lost Copyright, July 20, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:15:00 AM

Creative write. congrats on the win

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend!!!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/20/2014 9:15:00 PM

Yes, liked this very much Faye. Congratulations

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 7:44:00 PM

Congrats on this wonderful piece Faye...hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:15:00 PM

this is above par, my dear. and it's also a real haiku. Congrats for your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2014 10:30:00 AM

very clever haiku many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2014 9:55:00 AM

Lovely haiku with a message that is not lost on us! Well done...and congratulations! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:37:00 AM

Faye, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

David Mohn

Date: 7/27/2014 6:08:00 PM

This is super Faye...perfect

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/23/2014 6:39:00 AM

Wow! Very nice, Faye. This one certainly open up the imagination. It goes far beyond the three lines that you have created. This will be the first Haiku that I have put into my Faves. So well done, my friend.... Robert.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/21/2014 8:20:00 PM

This my friend is a truly great Haiku!! It is surely to place very, very high IMHO.. BBBBBRAVOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:36:00 PM