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haiku 38

as we walk 
pots clink against canteens –
squirrels chatter

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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Excellent haiku enjoyed. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 12:57:00 AM
    Congrats Debbie~A.O

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 8:53:00 PM
    oh this is so cute. Well, tell me, Debs, was the mist hanging over Machu Picchu for you like in the picture I viewed of it?

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:45:00 PM
    True old fashion camping..Reads like a winner to me..Great way to go for the contest..I would think that Edna was a very unique individual..Good to know that she touched on your family personally..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Reading this haiku gave me a happy feeling, I think it's those squirrel chatter-- and so happy mama monkey is happy! Btw, I guess I never thanked you for that poem of mine-- one I recited and entered-- Neverland over Wonderland-- thanks for that line, that poem I consider one of my personal favorites. smoochies back to you!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Hi Deb - For one reason or another I just can't keep up with reading and writing (and probably 'rithmetic). Just thought I'd stop by. Must have heard the canteens and pots. Great haiku - perks the ears. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:37:00 PM
    hmmm...makes me wonder where you are exactly...little mystery here and I like it!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 2:35:00 PM
    good one, deb. soupmail.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 12:01:00 PM
    I love it greatly

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:16:00 PM
    I always love your haiku, Debbie. I feel like I learn something new each time I read one. This one reminds me of portaging through the forest on a canoe trip. Wonderful :)

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:55:00 PM
    I also have chattering squirrels...nice Debbie

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 3:26:00 PM
    ...chattering squirrel... (?).....well done Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :))