Haiku 35

Your breasts, rising. Mountain primrose.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2013 2:30:00 PM

oh, my you are so good with these!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 3:43:00 PM

Wow! Thanks a bunch for the compliment. Jack

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/9/2013 6:44:00 AM

I'm a fan...how bout you?...haha

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 7:15:00 AM

You betcha, to use a familiar phrase. Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2013 6:33:00 AM

Interesting Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..I don't think that I have ever tried to get the scent of Violets but I will now that you said that ..I think that possibly they don't have much of a scent..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/9/2013 6:34:00 AM

Thanks for the visit by my work..Your presence was uplifting..Sara