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Haiku 34

asphalt steams in August's heat ice through a glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/14/2013 6:56:00 AM
Nice!!
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:47:00 PM
amazing visuals Debbie, thanks for sharing...enjoyed reading...
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Date: 2/13/2013 7:09:00 PM
beautiful imagery.. in such short lines.. u still wrk magic with words.. im glad to be back .. love Maryam
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Date: 2/13/2013 4:46:00 PM
I like the touch you gave to the juxtaposition, very nicely done my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a creative piece, Great Work!!
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