Sycamore Tree

giant sycamore branches reaching to heaven -- a shady haven 2/19/2013

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/21/2013 9:58:00 AM

Beautiful image on giant sycamore, the top branches with leaves makes a hanging shady space you called it shady heaven. Well done. Loved always, bl

Bonchance Longfall

Date: 6/8/2013 11:26:00 AM

Kim you write beautiful Haiku's! I once gave feedback to a writer who asked for critical feedback, I said that although I loved the write he called it a Haiku and there was nothing of nature in it. He was not polite afterwards, lol. Wonderfully written!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/23/2013 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful visual Kim. Warm Smiles, Connie

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/23/2013 11:24:00 AM

I would love to see one of these trees. Nice haiku Kim. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/23/2013 10:43:00 AM

That's where I have my glider.... so relaxing in the spring and summer. Lovely haiku !!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 5:40:00 PM

I think that I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree!! Was that how it went? This reminds me of that. Also of the new movie Safe Haven that I just saw. you would love that romantic movie.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 AM

Very good descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Those are such beautiful trees which grow to massive size if allowed the room..They do creative yard work though with the leaves, balls, and bark..Thanks for stopping by..Your reviews are always uplifting..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/20/2013 7:46:00 PM

A true haiku! A rare find.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/20/2013 10:01:00 AM

lovely, kim!